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Fully Lucid Website

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http://fullylucid.com/ <---That is my website... I actually made it like a month ago, some buttons don't work because I haven't added that feature yet. Let me know what you all think.
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The text could use a bit more contrast with the background, but other than that it's damn cool.
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Alright thanks, well I'm also approaching the phase where my level editor is worth showing to the world. So you may see a "GAMES" tab on that site in the near future xD.
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The background takes a while to load and most of the buttons don't work (as you said) but pretty darn good.
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Yea I guess it does.... I'll have to either make a new background or get rid of it. :P thanks for feedback. I'm also going to brighten the font when I get around to it.
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Re: Fully Lucid Website

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Looks great. The speed, buttons, and text were the only thing I noticed, and the text really isn't that bad. One mighty fine site ya got there
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Critiques:
- Gloss is overdone. I'd opt in for a smooth gradient for the header, and a straight gloss line for the buttons (curved gloss doesn't look good imo)
- When I looked at your website all I saw was the image and the horizontal rule. You have serious contrasting issues going on... the text is really dark and needs brightening up
- The Logo is in the center, which is fine, but then you have a vertical divider which makes me think theres supposed to be something on the right side of it... but there isn't (planned?)
- The background has noise, which is fine, but the noise isn't monochromatic... it's all colorful :S
- The way the website is structure right now, it looks fine up until 1680xsomething ... There are people with 1920x1080 ;)
- content-span.png only needs to be 1px wide ;)
- The background image is 1mb... this can be cut in half by making it a Gif
- Try putting rounded corners on your content boxes
- You also want to obtain some sort of content management system, trust me.
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xiphirx wrote:Critiques:
- Gloss is overdone. I'd opt in for a smooth gradient for the header, and a straight gloss line for the buttons (curved gloss doesn't look good imo)
- When I looked at your website all I saw was the image and the horizontal rule. You have serious contrasting issues going on... the text is really dark and needs brightening up
- The Logo is in the center, which is fine, but then you have a vertical divider which makes me think theres supposed to be something on the right side of it... but there isn't (planned?)
- The background has noise, which is fine, but the noise isn't monochromatic... it's all colorful :S
- The way the website is structure right now, it looks fine up until 1680xsomething ... There are people with 1920x1080 ;)
- content-span.png only needs to be 1px wide ;)
- The background image is 1mb... this can be cut in half by making it a Gif
- Try putting rounded corners on your content boxes
- You also want to obtain some sort of content management system, trust me.
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Re: Fully Lucid Website

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I like the design, placement and everything, but the contrast is killing me.
I don't usually need to were my glasses in front of the computer, this this time I have to.

Work with that, and I will approve this 8)
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